小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

Dragon Boat Festival is one of Chinese traditional festivals,which falls on lunar May 5th every year. Dragon boat festival,spring festival,Tomb-sweeping Day and Mid-autum day are regarded as four traditional festival to Chinese. About the beginning of Dragon Boat Festival has many speaking,but many people accepted one is it aimed to memerize famous patriotic poem QuYuan. There are many customs on Dragon Boat Festival, for example eating Zongzi, having dragon boat race,drinking realgar wine and so on. Dragon Boat Festival has regarded as country legal festival since 2008,which not only can help to spread traditional culture, but also adept people’s need.