小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用。

Dragon Boat Festival is one of Chinese traditional festivals. It’s on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. It is knows as one of the four major traditional festivals of Han Chinese together with the Spring Festival, the Qingming Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival. A number of theories exist about its origins, but the best accepted one is that it’s for memorizing the famous patriotic poet Qu Yuan. On this day, people have the customs of eating zongzi(rice dumpling), racing dragon boats and drinking realgar wine, etc. In 2008, it was recognized as a public holiday in mainland China for the first time which cannot only help spread this traditional culture but also meet the need of people.