高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。

NanJing, which is the capital city of JiangSu province, located in southeastern China, has a population of approximate 5 million. Moreover, NanJing has a long history of more than 2400 years, there have been 10 dynasties chosen it as the capital city. Amazingly, there are a many place of interest such as XuanWu lake, JiMing temple, stone castle and so forth, which are considered as components of beauty scene of NanJing. Besides, as well as a overwhelming number of modernizing factories, there are also a great deal of buildings built in the this city. That's what a wonderful paradise NanJing is!