高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者在句法层面做的很棒。

NanJing, which is the capital city of JiangSu province, located in southeastern China, has a population of approximate 5 million. Moreover, NanJing has a long history of more than 2400 years, during this time, there have been 10 dynasties chosen it as the capital city. Amazingly, there is a great many famous scenes such as XuanWu lake, JiMing temple, stone castle and so forth, all of them are considered as components of spectacular beauty of NanJing. Besides, as well as a overwhelming number of modernizing factories, there are also numerous buildings built in the this city. That's what a wonderful paradise NanJing is!