2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；从句数量不足；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Nothing succeeds without a strong will. As us need reading and learning, because of we always give up halfway, we'll face failune. So strong will is indispenble. Nothing succeeds without a strong will . As a worder that he need hard word keed his life. this strong will performance. So strong will is closely related to our life.