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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36933
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分42.0分
评语:

单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Xiaoxi is my best friend. She is thirteen. Her birthday is on March 10th. She lives in Haimen. She has five cousins but I have three cousins. Her father and mother are both teachers. Her favourite lessons are English and Art. She likes them very much. She likes drawing and reading after school. She plays with her cousins and does her homework at the weekend. She likes badminton very much. She plays badminton on Saturday. This is my friend.

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