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山东临沂市临沭县2013届高三下学期模拟试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:30浏览次数:1169
要求:

如何利用课间10分钟?有些高中学生课间依旧在教室认真学习(如图1),也有些高中学生走出教室积极活动(如图2)。请根据下面两幅图片用英文写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:
1. 简要描述图片;
2. 结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想: 你更喜欢哪一种方式?简述理由(至少两点)。

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注意:

1. 对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数120左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
Breaks between classes are intended to give students a short time to be refreshed in body and
mind so that they can go on with their learning energetically and efficiently. Students in class
are usually looking forward to the break.

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Breaks between classes are intended to give students a short time to be refreshing in body and mind so that they can go on with their learning energetically and efficiently.Students in class are usually looking forward to the break. The students make use of the break in different ways.Some prefer playing games out of class or chatting with their friends.However,others want to use this time to review their lessons and do their home work. I personally prefer the former way.Because playing with my friends during the break makes my mind refresh for the next class,what is more,a good health is also very important for our studies.We do not have to sacrifice our time of enjoyment to make progress in our studies,as long as we use our time efficiently,we can also improve our studies.

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