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Nowadays, with the development of our society, the phenomenon of pirated products is becoming more and more serious. It brings about a lot of problems in our country and evokes a bad effect on the improvement of economy. Meanwhile, there are some reasons following. For one hand, some of people think pirated products are cheaper than the genuine products so that they can save a lot of money by using it. What's more, the pirated product almost has the same function as the genuine's one so that they can enjoy it with a lower cost. For another hand, people can share kinds of materials on the Internet so they can get what they want such as pirated music, applications or software on it conveniently. Thus, as far as I am concerned, there is no denying the fact that it will give rise to a negative effect on our social and economic development. Worse still, it will do great harm to the law of our country which keeps those people who gain a patent from being hurt. In my opinion, ignoring the benefit of pirated products, I think we should say no to it uncompromisingly and become a model to appeal to other people against it. Only in this way can our world has a more bright and harmonious future!
