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题目要求：
Today，the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解：
报告类题目，难度不大，思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段：开头
第二段：原因——环境污染，健康问题，工作压力
第三段：解决——绿色科技+绿化，健康意识+运动设施，学会自我减压
第四段：结尾
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
With the rapid social development.I have a question .Are you happy in today's society?In my opinion,some people maybe don't think so.because of a serious of problems facing everyday.Such as environment pollution,health problem,high pressure especially among the young people. The government should pay more attention social problems like these and some measures need to be taken urgently to solve these problems, some suggestions of mine as following can be accepted if you think them reasonable. Green technology and make green by planting trees,flowers,etc. During our spare time ,do some exercises to reduce our pressures. As long as we work toward the same, it will be better i think.
