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Some students go to the opposite direct of the road. What's more, they are playing with each other when they are walking. Some students pick up another one and talk when they ride bikes.What's more, a few students rush into the motoway. The phenomenon of students'driving is really caused people to warm up and build security awardness.Therefore, we should be careful on the way home. First of all, we need keep a distance when the car turn left or right. Second, we should stop when the red light turn on and go when the green light turn on. Last but not least, we really shoud walk on the crosswalk. Life is the most precious gift that we should to cherish it.In my perspective, we should take actions right now.
