文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Dear David: I already received your E-mail and I'm glad to you will come to China soon.I kown you want to learn Chinese to understand China better.Many foreiner think Chinese is hard to study.But just only get the key you will find that's nothing too hard.You must learn about the right and left of Chinese character or the up and down of Chinese character,even more complicated.Now you know Chinese character and you can try the writing and read it,you will learn various of Chinese characters.If you think you have confidence enough,try to talk to Chinese people to improve your language level.Language need more exercise and for a long time you will speak Chinese as good as me,that's amazing ah!See you in Beijing,wish you happy!
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