可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Dear David: I already received your E-mail and I'm glad to know you will come to China soon.I know you want to learn Chinese to understand China better.Many foreiner think Chinese is hard to study.But just only get the key you will find that's nothing too hard.You must learn about the right and left of Chinese character or the up and down of Chinese character,even more complicated.Now you know Chinese character and you can try the writing and read it,you will learn various of Chinese characters.If you think you have confidence enough,try to talk to Chinese people to improve your language level.Language need more exercise and for a long time you will speak Chinese as good as me,that's amazing ah!See you in Beijing,wish you happy!
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