文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。
Dear David: I already received your E-mail and I'm glad to know you will come to China soon.I know you want to learn Chinese to understand China better.Many foreigner think Chinese is hard to study.But just only get the key you will find that's nothing too hard.You must learn about the right and left of Chinese character or the up and down of Chinese character,even more complicated.Now you know Chinese character and you can try the writing and read it,you will learn various of Chinese characters.If you think you have confidence enough,try to talk to Chinese people to improve your language level.Language need more exercise and for a long time you will speak Chinese as good as me,that's amazing ah!See you in Beijing,wish you happy!
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