采用了一些简单的从句;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。
Dear David I'm so happy that I heard you will go to beijing to study chinese.Here are some advice that might can help you to learn chinese well. Firstly,you should learn chinese words as more as you can like you studying English. Word is the base in the learn of lauguage .Secondly ,If you want to learn English well,you must learn grammer,only you can understand the grammer succeed ,you can write article fluency.Thirdly,you should use chinese in you daily life.Last but not least,you should be interested in chinese,maybe you can listen to some chinese songs,or watch the China'TV shows.I hope my sugguestions can help you a lot. I'm looking forward your reply. Yours WangMing
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