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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Dear Jane, I’m very glad to hear from you.Thank you for your kindness to me .I will tell you for my situation. Firstly, as you know,I am an outgoing girl,so I can get along with my classmates and my teachers,they are so kind that I can make friends with them.Secondly,when I arrived at school,I can't catch up with the progress of the study. but now I can join the class easily.Thirdly,you know I want to go abroad, so I study English hard,also I like English very much.Last but not least,although I am confident of English study, I still have difficulty in English study. I hope you can give some advice about how to learn English well. Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself. Yours, Xiao Hua