文章衔接手法恰当;从句使用不足,建议增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。
An issue has raised much discussion that whether dialects should be acceptable in public places. As far as i am concerned, dialects should be acceptable in public places. The reasons are as follows. First of all, dialect is a kind of cultural specialty, so accept dialects in public places helps preserve the cultural characters. China is a country of long history. Obviously, the hiatory of a country is of great importance to a country's development. Dialects are the products of China's long history. Each dialect stands for a special culture of a certain age and place. Secondly, dialect is a form of cultural difference, and we should respect the cultural differences. Differences result to personalities in some degree.Therefore, accept dialects in public places shows our respect to different cultures and it can form our cultural personalties. Last, dialect is a represent of cultural development. Accept dialect in public places contribute to cultural development. A dialect formed because of its importance.People use dialects can increase the communication of different cultures. And communication is the most effective way to exchange culture. When culture is exchanged, the culture is developed. In a word, dialect plays a crucial role in culture character, as a menmber of the world, we have the duty to learn different cultures, and dialect is a effective way to help us.