小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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Last summer,I went to The Gread Wall with my brother. The Gread Wall is so long that I can not get to the tail. My brother told me that The Gread Wall was built 2000 years ago. It was used to spread the news and defead the enemise from other countries. It is 2000 meters long. Now, thousands and thousands of people from house and abroud were attracted to visied it. I am so proud that I am a chineae who can visit itin any time. In there,wo took a lot of photos so that I can have clera mind.