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作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉。
Amazingly, the violent accidents of campus have haunted back and forth in the school since 2010, which undoubtedly arouse the concern of our public. Hardly have this phenomena taken place did we set out reflecting how to improve school safety, which from my perspective, is supposed to serve as a priority to resolve the plight mentioned above. At the top of the list, necessary safeguard should be taken into account, for example, security guards are required to supervise what happen in campus so immediate that if there are violence occurring, the flame can be quench as far as possible. Moreover, civility education is needed as well, in order to enhance the harmonious concepts among students, it's preferable to host a educational campaign or lecture for them. last but not least, parents also are compulsory to foster their children with agreeable household education, as a result, keep their children on the track of mental healthy of which is the requisite ingredient of harmonious culture and school safety at campus. If we stick to helping improve school safety with all the efforts make by school, society and family, this terrible phenomenon would never happens off and on in the future.
