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作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础较为扎实。
Amazingly, the violence of campus have haunted back and forth in the school since 2010, which undoubtedly raise up the concern of our public. Hardly have these phenomena taken place did we set out reflecting how to improve school safety, which from my perspective, is supposed to serve as a priority to resolve the plight mentioned above. At the top of the list, necessary safeguard should be taken into account, for example, security guards are required to supervise what happen in campus so immediate that if there is any violence occurring, the flame can be quenched as far as possible. Moreover, civility education is needed as well, in order to enhance the harmonious concepts among students, it's preferable to hold enough educational campaigns or lectures for them. Last but not least, parents also are compulsory to foster their children with agreeable household education, as a result, keep their children on the track of mental healthy of which is the requisite ingredient of harmonious culture and school safety at campus. If we stick to helping improve school safety with all the efforts make by school, society and family, this terrified phenomenon would never happen off and on in the future.
