注意文中出现的部分句子错误;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
To my best friend: Hello,I heard that you want to travel in china,first,as a local,the thing that i want to tell you is China is a beautiful country,there are many significance sights that will make you amazed,so let me introduce some great sights for you at next. In my hometown,the most famous sight is Huangguoshu Waterfall,there are