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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分54.5分
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部分高级词汇用的不错,但拼写检查还需加强;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;适当丰富句式。

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every people have different views about the same thing .At some time ,once people see somthing or hear something,they will come to conclusion promptly .maybe someone think it"s normal .but as far as i am concerned ,it is not wiseable to get conclusion without thinking when we see or hear something . in the anciet time ,here are a stoy .which is meaningful .it tells a man standing around a friut tree .so someone seeing the thing considered he is a thief .however ,in the fact ,the man only relax beside the friut tree. according to this story .we are supposed to learn to be patient when we stumble on something .it is correct to obtain outcoming after figuring out the truth 。 .i .as a student ,do bear in mind : thinking twice before geting conclusion .which is the best methods to aviod making mistakes .whenver see or hear anything , it is essientional to keep calm and think. .

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