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Recently the rise in phenomenon of online shopping has aroused popular concern, even become a fasion. There is no doubt that shoppong online is more convinece, and the goods also much cheaper than that in center. But every corn has two sides, it also has negative effect. For one thing, the time people sit in front of the computer increase, conversely, they have less time to do excise. For another thing, it really impact the economy of the physical store even led them to close down. Still another, the quality of commodies from online are uncertain. It's obviously to see everything has its benefit and disadvantage. As far as I am concerned, it's better for people to buy the needs in person. And I really hope the online seller could improve their commodities quality.
