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Recently the rise in phenomenon of online shopping has aroused popular concern, even become a fashion. There is no doubt that shopping online is more convenience, and the goods also much cheaper than that in center. But every corn has two sides, it also has its negative effects. For one thing, instead go to shopping mall, the time people sit in front of the computer increase which really harm for health. For another thing, the number of residents shopping online swift growth, what really impacts the economy of the physical store even led them to close down. Still another, the quality of commodities from online is uncertain which worried us. Obviously to see everything has its benefit and disadvantage. As far as I am concerned, it's better for people to buy the needs in person. And I really hope the online seller could improve their quality of goods.
