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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, an increasingly number of individuals are likely to judge people by their appearance. For example, the salesmen in shopping mall may estimate you by your appearance.If you wear brand clothes or look like a rich man , they will give you a warm reception.However,it is unwise to judge one only through his semblance. From my perspective, there are mainly two reasons why we can’t judge a person just by his out-looking.For one thing,judging a man by his appearance is a one -side view as everyone has strengths and weaknesses. For another, those who don’t like dress up themselves may like pursue their inner beauty.What’s more, one’s temperament is showed by his manners and style of conversation instead of his appearance. To sum up, it is definitely unwise and undesirable to justify human beings only through their appearance.Only by comprehensive means can we make reasonable and persuasive decision on them.

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