2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I will take my foregin friend to see Beijing if he comes to my hometown.I take him to there,because i think Beijing having a long history in China.On the one hand, Bejing is the capital of china,on the other hand,there are interesting building.Such as Gugong ,Tiananmen.In addition,we can eat many dilicious food in there.SO,i will take him see Beijing.