小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend is a kindness girl who is easy to get along with people around her. wearing a sweet on face,she convey confidence to other and gain confidence at the same time. Although she doesn't absolutly have the advantage of study,she's the quality of diligence to help her overcome herself and make progress step by step.