小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用。

My best friend is a kindness girl who is easy to get along with people around her. Wearing a sweet on face, she conveys confidence to other and gain confidence at the same time. Although she doesn't absolutely have the advantage of study, she's the quality of diligence to help her overcome herself and make progress step by step.