小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

My best friend is a wonderful girl who is easy to get along with person around her. Wearing a sweet on face, she conveys confidence to other and gains confidence at the same time. Although she doesn't absolutely have the advantage of study, she's the quality of diligence to help her overcome herself and make progress step by step.