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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

with the improvement of science and technology,internet has become an indispensable tool for us.As it can be employed into any fields,we are more likely to rely on internet to develop our interpersonal communication. there exist a great deal of social services and interpersonal websites,which may result in both positive impact and negative impact to people. first we can keep touch with our friends more conviniently and frequently by clicking the mouse and sending a message. second the various ways of conmmunication such as sending voice message,sharing photos and sending e-mails add the joy to communiation. while the negative aspects can never be ignored we are dependent on those tools but lose the ability of communicate face-to-face.many people would rather bend over their screen than show their feelings in reality. and we are closely tied with the world that we slip the social website lest losing some informationn seemed valuable.

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