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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中词汇丰富度和学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有较多拼写错误；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；连词使用偏少。
From:hubin@163.com Date:2013/8/20 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject:to establish business relationship Dear sir and madam I knew the new product no: 5670 at exhibition during 15 to 22 Dec.at NewYork and am interested in it.Wish your could send our a price list and instruction.We thank for cooperation and wish could establish bussiness relationship. We are looking forward to your early reply. Your sincerely hubin
