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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
The importance of keeping a good mood It is known that a variety of pressure is inevitably filled in people's lives. There is no deny fact that people can get rid of them.However, as the saying goes,presure is the living motion. To deal with pressure smoothly,it is important for people to keep a good mood. There are several resons as follows. To begin with, keeping a good mood is a optimistic attitude towards the pressure. It will hepl people to realize the situation, and then take some accordingly measures. For instance, when the optimitsic meet some difficulties in the life,compared to those who possess a depressed mood, they may exert to settle them. Moreover, a good mood entitles people to enjoy the pressure instead of escaping, due to the fact that they strongly believe they can subjugate it. Consequently, as far as I am concerned, keeping a good mind is not only imprtant in people's daily life, but also vital in their minds. In addition, keep a good mind can make people's life more easy and simple.
