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Dear Sir or Madam, I am among the faithful audience of your radio station.I am writing the letter for the purpose of inquiring about the pop music program. For one thing,it will be greatly appreciated if you can give a brief introduction about the pop stars before playing their songs.For another,I always miss your wonderful program in the afternoon,so I'd like to know your timetable of the music program.If it is convenient for you,please send a timetable to me,My E-mail address is zhangwei@163.com. Thanks for your due attention to this letter.I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei
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