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文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误。
In contemporary world, onlinne shopping has gained great popularity and it is of great convenience. Firstly, based on a survey, a marjority of the young acknowledge that they perfer to shopping online rather than in stores. Secondly, compared with shopping in stores, online shopping are superior in mang ways. However, online shopping may have a variety of difficulties or trobles in buyer experience. For example, it can be noticed that a large number of package have returned due to goods quality, appearance，and quantity and so on. Sometimes, it is difficult for consumer to distinguish quality whether good or not. In addition, though good quality, they can not sure that the seller credit. Then, how to make good balance between buyer and seller? I am convinced that seller must has reliable credit while buyer learn to distinguish goods. Only in this way can enable everyone to online shopping with happyiness.
