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山东临沂市临沭县2012-2013学年高二下学期模拟试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:10浏览次数:2596
要求:
假如你是李华,因不能赴约去你朋友John 家共进晚餐,因为你将忙于准备后天的一门重要考试,据此用英语写一封致歉信。要点包括:
1、感谢对方邀请
2、遗憾地告诉对方你无法赴约并说明理由
3、祝对方度过一个愉快的时光,并另约时间联系。
注意:字数:100左右。可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

用户练习作文:

Dear John, Thanks for your sincere invitation for me to have a meal with you and your family tomorrow evening, which I deem as one of the best honor occur to me. While I am so desire for having dinner with you and your family, there is something that I couldn't throw away, which in effect is the important exam that would be taken after tomorrow, consequently, I have to prepare for it otherwise an expected misfortune will come to me--fail to pass the exam. As a result, I am so pitiful to say that I could not attend your dinner tomorrow. I really hope that you will have a unforgettably happy time with your family tomorrow, you can invite me another time when I am free, or I will invite you to my home in turn. yours sincerely Li Hua,

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