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April’s campus is fair beautiful, the flowers and grasses are both in their bosoms. There is only several months before we senior students graduating from school. Our life was covered by a complex atmosphere during the period. With happiness, with sadness. We are happy because we will soon live a new life in which we can put what we have learned into usage. We are sad because we still want to spent much more time at school to learn more knowledge. With a mixed mood, I want to talk about what is the most impressive thing I have got. In the four years, I have learned a lot. The most important point is the awareness of self-study which I think will have lasting influence in future life. In the middle school, I spent most of my time sitting in classroom listening to teachers. After class, I paid much of time for homework. The only thing I bear in mind is that I can be an excellent student if I listened carefully in class and did well in homework. However, in the college, the lessons is much less than middle school. There is much free time I can arrange by myself. In the first year of college, the same with middle school, every lesson I listened to teacher carefully. While after class, I spent much time on go shopping, watching TV and chatting with my friends, never study. Day by day, the life ran very peaceful and comfortable. We came to our final exam which I had much confidence of. But the result of the final shocked me, I cannot imagine that I failed one of my test. Therefore, I came to realize that it was not enough to be an excellent student if I only learn well in class. The next year of college, I did not spent much time on playing. I began to go to library every day. I intestined many books there, such as literary, science and medical and others. I learned much interesting knowledge that I have never known before. Gradually, I found such kind of life is full of meaning and give much pleasure. As time went by, I found the ability of self- study became better and better. The teacher cannot teach us everything we need. Most of the knowledge we have to obtain by ourselves. Thus, the capacity to self- study is very important to us even graduated. Time flies! In the past four years, I made many friends, visited many places, learned much knowledge. There is sweet, and there is sorrow. There is success, and there is failure. There is enjoyment, and there is regrets. General speaking, college life is like a color board with red and blue. Although college finished, the memory will be lasting.