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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重偏高且句子错误有点多;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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Trust is count for people to keep ralationship .What"s the more ,It is important to keep trust in teamwork .So how to maintain trust in our daily life ? Here are some tips about keep trust .Firstly,Please try to understand someone else that except you .Only you feel others" feelings on the other side ,you will get away from war .Secondly,Communicating with other guys as much as you can possible.Everything is able to be solved by chating with .Communicating can help people to keep queit when they stumble on bad things .finally, It is essential to build identical interests between you and other side . As far as i am concerned ,As a student ,what i need to do bear in mind is believe anyone uncondntionly and irrevacably .

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