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The most thoroughly and completely criticized by Hank Jenkins-smith and Paul Sabatier of the policy cycle and get a summary DeLeon,s ideas about the following opinions: 1. the model is not a really cause and effect model-it do not do forecasting everything happen or from one stage to another.for example when the leader makes the decision to do something, the team-makers should follow the command and carry out,but sometimes is the decision is wrong or duo to team-makers slack lead to these decisions can not implement. 2.it does not offer the clear evidence for testing empirical hypotheses result in setting objectives and priorities are not clear. 3.It is not quite accurate to describe what happens.When the problem is perceived and defined by people who can not forecast what will happen in the future. 4.it has a built-in legalistic and top-down concentrate; 5.From the analysis of the single cycle and neglect of aspect of a system of inter-governmental relations which interacted on each other.Such as ,how does an orginal definiton of isssue affect the another one which the way appropriate responses are produced ? 6.it does not acknowledged that policy-oriented learning is happening during the entire process.The conception of issue identification in the policy cycle far away from poicy-oriented learning.