文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
Tester is my favorite friend.He always plays with me.I have known him since 3 years ago.I remember he was a student at that time and I was an engineer.We often go to swim and fish together.His father is my English teacher.Tester is good at playing the drums.I will go to his family on this Wednesday,I hope that I can meet his father.This is a test.