文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词;运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练。
Eating with parents makes you healthier Usually with my parents enjoy dinner together.I will feel the happy,enjoyable.but if they not eat dinner that with me,i will eat very few. This is psychologically fell is not physiology that can control. Reach sit,often simile use to the body .I think family should be together. Eating with parents makes you healthier