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Will E-books Replace Traditional Books Nowadays, with the rapid development of technology, E-books is becoming more and more popular because of bringing us many conveniences to read and study. What's more, some people take an opinion that E-books will take the complete possession of traditional books in the future and there are some reasons following. For one hand, they think the cost of E-books is much cheaper than traditional books so that they can save a lot of money by reading it. Besides, most of E-books on the website are almost free and can be downloaded to your computer or cell-phone conveniently. And then, you can enjoy it anytime you like. For another hand, you can read E-books anywhere even in the darkness. It can be kept well in your cell-phone or computer thus you don't have to carry a heavy book outdoor all the time. However, as far as I am concerned, I don't think internet-based books will replace traditional books one day ignoring the benefits it brings to us. Just Because traditional books also have many advantages. For example, it helps us focus on what we read which will promote your efficiency greatly. In addition, some of books are worth collecting and we can read it from time to time. Thus, according to the above, we should make good use of them and be take an objective view toward them. Only in this way can we have a more bright and meaningful future.