托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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I believe it is serious to make a judgement ,since the judgement represent your idea,attitude and honesty.as well as known ,it is very hard to make a serious judgement just from first-sight ,his/her writing ,wearing and saying.These judgements could be called snap judgement .So snap judgements can never be trusted. First,the judgement is very critical for us ,because we will make important decison by our judgement.We will make wrong judgements follow the snap judgement. Second ,snap judgments could misleading you .With these snap judgments you would have lost the precious chance to make new friends ,get new opptunity and be successful. At last ,snap judgments will cause horrible mistake .For instance ,my friend invested his money to the stock market just because of listening to a sellsman's words instead of thinking carefully and making serious judgments by himself.The result of his sanp judgment was losing his depoist money almost 2million. In one word ,snap judgments can never be trusted for everyone who want to live in a happy life.