语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用。
Living an age when our adolescents are lack of the necessary guidance and supervision,we can never figure out the fact that teenagers are becoming especially self-conscious. Under this circumstance,the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions,which is pathetically and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable. The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint that we should never directly and irresponsibly come to conclusions only by listening or seeing what mainly lie in the following two aspects: To begin with,it is an invariable rular to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for just one second.So are the things happening around us. What we see or listen may be just some particular periods of the development of things,which prove unstable and changeable. In addition,the perspectives we get just through seeing or listening are often one-sided. Drawing conclusions rashly are not objective enough to make our statements persuasive. To sum up,it is unwise for us to define any thing as what we assume or imagine at first sight.Only by our serious thougt and accurate analyzing can we come up with more rational and reasonable conclusions.
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