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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；全文结构较为严谨。
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As we all know,strong will is the significant promise to succeed.Looking at people who had finished splendid and extraodinary achievement,we can easily figure out they went through a bunch of hardships.However, they didn't submit to the difficulties,and on the contrary,they overcame them bravely with great will .Their stories inform us of the fact that life is full of difficulties,which doesn't mean we ought to give in to them.Instead, we are supposed to deal with them by using our strong will.And only the people with strong will are able to accomplish great mission.There isn't a preson who can succeed with weak will in the history yet.When meeting obstacles in the life,one won't make it if he just feel scared and do nothing to overcome them.Students are no exception,and if they don't study hard, they won't become useful people eventually.
