2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

It goes without saying that this picture aims at revealing a current problem, whether the popularity of the internet narrows the distance between people or makes people more and more alienated. It seems that the network breaks the time and space constraints, so that we can keep in touch with our friends more frequently and more conveniently. However, with the communication becoming more and more accessible in the internet, we ignore the communication in the real society. Sometimes we have lunch together, and we play our phones with any talking. It is a bizarrerie but a common phenomenon in our life. In my opinion, the network actually makes our communication more convenient, but it cannot replace our intercourse in the real life. We can make a date in the line, and share our happiness in the weekend meeting.