从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文章高级词汇表达灵活,仍需增加词汇量;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
In my opinion,i agree the criticism of the ‘stages ‘theory of the policy cycle does not take the place of the real decision ,because no one will predict what will happen in the future,especially bureaucratic mechanism and administrative.It is very hard to make accurate and feasible scheme in a one-time process which means to get the right decision for policy makers too require great research. In my opinion,i agree the policy cycle does not take the place of the real decision ,because no one will predict what will happen in the future,especailly bureaucratic mechanism and administrative.It is very hard to make accurate and feasible scheme in a one-time process which means to get the right decision for policy makers too requires great research.