从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,不过文中词汇表达贫乏;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
In my opinion,i agree to the criticism of the ‘stages ‘theory of the policy cycle does not take the place of the real decision ,because no one will predict what will happen in the future,especially bureaucratic mechanism and administrative.It is very hard to make accurate and feasible scheme in a one-time process which means to get the right decision for policy makers too require great research. In my opinion,i agree to the criticism of the ‘stages ‘theory of the policy cycle does not take the place of the real decision ,because no one will predict what will happen in the future,especially bureaucratic mechanism and administrative.It is very hard to make accurate and feasible scheme in a one-time process which means to get the right decision for policy makers too require great research I