2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；请注意分段。

Most of parents take care of everything for children for the moment in society,whatever the children study at school or they already graduate from university so that so many children do not independent.The children can be find in anywhere.so in order to children to be independent,not only depend on themselves but also need parents help. There is a problem that why so many parents think they children cannot to be independent person and need them parents help?I think it's a false sense in them mind and they children can do more than them image.If they can change the mind while they are succeed on the first stage,then the parents should be them children alone,parents just need to believe them,once and once,if children do it wrong,parents will teach the method,children is able to dear with this thing.At last ,children to be independent.