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draw the conclusion casually is not intelligent It could not be intelligent to get the conclusion instantly only by what you saw and heard.because they could make us neglect the deeper-layer informations ,which may leads us to an opposite road.that is to say,drawing the conclusion casually is not intelligent. sometimes,we can met something on the internet like that: a beautiful chief announcer was outraged by someone.from the comments below the news we can see some people show the worry to her.however someothers suspect this is a speculation phenomenon,which can make her become famous in a bad method .so from this we could not see the truth ,maybe the girl was deeply hurt,maybe this is a trap,we can not get the evidence to support it. thus,It could not be intelligent to get the conclusion instantly only by what you saw and heard.
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