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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮。

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draw the conclusion casually is not intelligent It could not be intelligent to get the conclusion instantly only by what you saw and heard.because they could make us neglect the deeper-layer informations ,which may leads us to an opposite road.that is to say,drawing the conclusion casually is not intelligent. sometimes,we can met something on the internet like that: a beautiful chief announcer was outraged by someone.from the comments below the news we can see some people show the worry to her.however someothers suspect this is a speculation phenomenon,which can make her become famous in a bad method .so from this we could not see the truth ,maybe the girl was deeply hurt,maybe this is a trap,we can not get the evidence to support it. thus,It could not be intelligent to get the conclusion instantly only by what you saw and heard.

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