2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

　　In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it。 　　It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of HuaGuo Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy。 　　The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!