2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中词汇表达使用较丰富，部分高级词汇的使用比较灵活，单词拼写方面要继续努力。

The place I recommend to them is the dragon tower which is outstanding and morden buliding in my hometown Harbin. To welcome new centry, Dragon tower was designed and built by Heilongjiang government in 1999. With 250 meters height, it became the 3rd tallest tower in Asia. The main structure of it comprises both steel and aluminum alloy. At the beginning, visitors can apply free ticketa on line and 6 six monthes after, the proce is set to 150 Yuan. We can see from local news, there is a increasing trend that more and more tourists put dragen tower as their first traveling option when they come to Harvin.